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Friday, 24 August 2018

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MaI Afio mai o lou Vgoa o Esera im from Samoa.I live in NZ but I was born in Samoa. I'm 9 years old. I have 6 brothers but there are 9 people I my family including my Mom and Dad but there are 7 kids but there are 40 cousins in NZ including my uncles and aunties and there are 20 cousins in Australia and there are 5 in wellington and 21 in Samoa all together there are 74 . My hobbies are playing Fortnite, playing soccer and eating KFC.

I've been to 3 counties Apia, Australia and NZ. I had a dog before Isabelle's mother took it away from my family then she had to pay us $799.

My favourite food are sushi and Macers and KFC. My favourite subject is Maths and PE.My family have been to different countries but I still do not like to travel.

That's all about me.


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7 comments:

  1. Miss Morgan27 August 2018 at 15:46

    Hey Ezra,
    It is great to read more about you and what you like. It is interesting to know how many countries you have been to! Which one is your favourite?
    Next time it would be good to make sure the text doesn't go over the lines. If you could go back and fix this, that would be great. If you have copied it from a google doc you could try using control shift c and control shift v when you copy and paste to stop this from happening.
    Let me know what you decide to do!
    - Miss Morgan

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  2. Anonymous28 August 2018 at 09:50

    Thank you foe this helpful comment.
    My favorite country is Samoa because it is so hot so you could go swimming and you can eat ice cream lots of ice cream.
    what is your favorite country?

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    1. Mrs Kelsey Clifford28 August 2018 at 11:57

      mmmm ice-cream! What flavour is your favourite? Mine is Chocolate or Cookie Dough.
      My favourite country... that is such a tough question. I think my favourite country is New Zealand, but my favourite place to visit would be Hawaii.

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    2. Anonymous4 September 2018 at 09:18

      Hey! thanks for your comment.
      My favorite Ice cream flavor is chocolate and Hokey pokey.
      What is your favorite food in Hawaii?

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  3. Anonymous6 September 2018 at 14:27

    HI Ezra Its Niamh here I liked the way you put information like what game you like (Fortnight) it looks very cool.It took me back when I was in Australia I was 7 then.Next time you could put more words because for those bunns ( I tort they were eggs).You can make the picture smaller you can see the words.Can I please have a reply and how much time did you spend on this thank you .

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  4. Anonymous10 September 2018 at 16:59

    Kia ora Ezra, I love how you have introduced yourself in Samoan and where you are from. It makes it very personal which is fantastic. Why is it that you don't like to travel? Also why do you like Fortnite? Next time, I would suggest making sure that all your words fit on the page. I see Miss Morgan has told you above but if you need help doing it, come and see me and I will help you. Keep up the great work!

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    1. Anonymous11 September 2018 at 09:22

      THE for the comment
      The reason I dont like to travel is because when it is bumpy then I some times get a head ac.
      I like fortnight because it is a cool game and it is so fun and I am acidic to the game.

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