Today I was learning how to make a comment but to be confident I was a step up.Step up is the second.We got this knowledge from urumanuka.It went Begginer to Step up to Confident.We had to remember the Think six. what we did for the editing is we had to like rate how good they were and how bad the were and so ou have to have alot of information and have nearly everything rightI think to be honest I think I did pretty good and I did my best.This is the Think six TITTLE, INTRODUCTION, D.L.O, REFLECTION, SOURCES, QUESTION.We had to rate out of 6 ticks or 5 of other peoples comment and try to make a better one this is my best so far. Hope you enjoy.
Can you Make a better Comment than me?
Prove it
I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 22 July 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Ezra
ReplyDeleteI made a voice comment :)
<a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Z4h8V2q61l9tPQBbC7TtLpGa_4vck0xt/view?usp=sharing>This is from Jared, Your friend:)</a>
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