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I am a student at St. Bernadette's School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 15 November 2018
The Party
One afternoon there was a party and the party is only once a year.This party is called the dance party.If you win the dance party then a golden ball will appear and that golden thing is a wish and you can wish for what ever you want in the whole world and it will come true.I went to the party with my two friends and we went to place called the land of the dance.I went to the party then I sow lots of people so we danced until someone pushed me into a place were no one but her.She showed me the way to the golden realm with all the golden balls.I tried to touch it but it burned my hand and when I touched it a little red bottom was flashing but I did not know about it.Then so guards came rushing in and they garbed me and the girl so they made us go to sleep.When we woke up I sow my dad then he said why are you trying to break in then he turned around and he said its you why are you breaking in in a high voice.I said because she pushed me in to the thinning.It is not my flout.I felt bad for her so I steeped up and I thought for her and I killed them all.I had to kill my dad so I did.But before I killed him he pressed the self destruct button and broke and killed us all.
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