The Grey Pill
When I woke up I sow this Sabertooth, tiger looking at me it seid are you ok are you dead, because if you are i'm going to eat, you then just when it was going to eat me I stood up, I felt my head there was no bruise, or bump on my head.First it told me if I ,could help him with something Next I said ok then it lead, me to its tribe of lion and saber tooth tiger’s waiting, to attack the other lions and rhinos and the, eagles.I ride it and, I asked it what is your name then, He said he is the Destructor.The Destructor he said attack and all of then ran as fast as 2 cheaters.The Destructor, got the first hit on a rhino and then the bad team started dying 5 by 5.There was no one, on the other team that was alive.Then the Destructor seid come follow me I have something for, you then I said ok so you are lost I said yes, im lost I fell over then I bumped my head on a rock and I blacked out then you found me.Thank you for helping me now I will repay you with 8 pills you have to only pick one.There is a Yellow pill a Green pill there is a, Blue pill there is a Orange pill there is a Red pill there is a Pink pill, there is a Grey pill there is a Black pill the Destructor said what one are you going to pick the Grey pill then I took the Grey pill and left.Then I eat the pill I gather all the electronics and I made a robot then I could see my family then I stood on them but when I step on someone they come in to the robot and the robot was called MKX4 so me and my family went for a swim then They let me go in the middle so I don't Get lost again.
The End
Tuesday, 11 September 2018
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Hey Ezra, I really liked your story because it gotted really good words that I would never use in my stories and they are awesome. Also when you said that the robot was called MKX4 that sounded really cool. Next time you could work on fixing your spelling because at the start it said sow and I was really confused so I think you got to fix that.
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