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Friday, 14 September 2018

The Key :3

W.A.L.T write a descriptive story based on a picture.like today we are writing about a kid with a magnifying glass and the dad is looking mysterious and making it look like he has a beard but he doesn't.

One day a kid and his father were sleep. When the boy woke up there was a key but it wasn't just the key to the shed. It was the key to making his dad safe. That means that if he loses the key his dad will become a monster. He was scared of that happening to dad, so he kept it in his pocket.


It had been three day since it had gone missing. (He was skipping in the backyard and he tripped up and the key fell out and then he went in side). A fairy came(The fairy is the color of a rainbow and it is magical in fact it is the most magical fairy in the world and it is not crazy). Said to the kid if the key is lost for more than a week then your dad will turn into a monster but not just any monster he will turn into hulk. That night he stayed up looking for the key he looked in the bin he looked in the toilet he looked on the roof but then he fell of the roof then he went to sleep. He was so tired so he went to sleep for 3 days it was the Saturday so he had one day left until his dad turns into Hulk. But it was 6:00 pm he has 5 hours left so he pulls everything  down like the shelf's and the pictures then he didn’t find it he had been looking for 4 hours. He had 59 minutes let he found it but it was too late( He looked in the neighbors house and he looked in the dog poop).He saw the key but it was too late his dad has already turned into a monster but he didn’t turn in to any kind of monster he turned into hulk and hulk made hell in to hell.Then Odin father of Thor and Hela and Loki.(where he was he was outside).Odin told Hulk to quit it! But he attacked then Odin sliced him in half.Then I fell of a cliff(we lived by a cliff)because if I stay alive they will kill me and they might feed me to there dogs.The are huge.They do not leave a tiny bit of meat on the ground.


THE END!

1 comment:

  1. Hey Ezra, I really liked how you added the superheroes that sounded really cool and in the start of your story was really good and it sounded really mischievous. I think next time you could work on fixing the "Then he fell of" because it didn't really make sense when you said that.

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